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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Sta.sh
very nice font, brother.
- E/G/M/P should be more condensed.
- H and L should be wider.
- The top bowl of 'B' sticks out a bit too much.
- The horizontal bar in 'G' is set too low.
- The tail in 'Q' should be a bit longer
- The 'R' looks misshapen as there's too much weight build-up where the leg curves against the bowl.
- The 'i' lacks a serif at the top, which looks strange. It looks even more strange next to the 'j' which does have a serif.
- The tittle (the dot) on 'j' is set too low, the serif is too high and the tittle is also a bit too small as far as I can see. You need to make it consistent to 'i'.
- I like the corner in the arm of 'r' but you're not using such a corner anywhere else in the typeface. Rather make it rounded.
- 'o' is too condensed.
- The bottom of 't' should be a bit more longer and a bit more on the baseline. The gradual curve you're using makes the 't' look like it's floating a bit. The horizontal bar should also be longer on the right.
- 'w' has a huge weight build-up because the strokes are close together. I think the width of 'w' is perfect so making the character wider to solve the weight issue is not an option. I think you should use ink traps.
- The question mark is too rounded and also a bit too light compared to the letters.
- The @ symbol is too big and the way you end the stroke in a sharp ending is not consistent with the typeface.
- The horizontal bar in '4' should be lower.